Title: The Omegas
Author: Annie Nicholas
Publisher: Lyrical Press
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Rating: You Want to Read
Reviewed By: Janelle
Only a vampire is man enough to teach werewolves how to fight.
Pretty librarian Sugar wants her life to stay quiet. That’s hard enough when friends and neighbors turn into furry wolves every full moon. But when a hot vampire gets involved, life’s bound to get complicated.
The Omega have always been the pansies of the paranormal. Now Chicago’s top werewolf pack has issued them a life or death challenge. Their only option: hire a vampire warrior to teach them the moves.
Daedalus has been a powerful vampire for ages. Intrigued by the chance to train the geeks of the underworld, he wasn’t bargaining on losing his heart to a human. Can he make the Omegas a success, fit into Sugar’s quiet life, and avoid being ripped to shreds in the process?
This feels like half a story. It opens with a brief introduction to the situation, and follows with speratic scene that largely take place between sheets. There is no character development, no time with the characters considering their choices; all these things happen behind the scenes and spoken of only in past tense. this makes the story rather predictable because the readers is never given the chance to wonder what the characters will do.
The sex isn't bad, but is a bit too frequent. Sex should add to the story, not over shadow it.
Overall, it is not a bad story, there just needs to be more of it.
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